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Funhouse

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There are muffled
noises, and you hide your
eyes in your hands.

There was a tattered and
worn copy of Hamlet
in your bag. I can remember
watching you skim for just
the right
phrase.

The house speaks
in a soft tongue.

Something is rotten in the state of Denmark.

The smell of flesh,
rotting,
echoes through these halls.
My arms sink in
my skin.

I will walk out of the air,
into my grave.

The house creaks,
and it is speaking again.
The doors are shut,
and they giggle when
our backs our turned.

Go, bid the soldiers shoot.

The house tells us
we are not to be,
and our steps
will earn
teeth digging at our
flesh.

Your hands are cold.
My face is cold.

From our flesh, may violets spring.
Written for #ThePoetryofDA's Halloween contest, Fun House of Horror. I couldn't help the Hamlet references. There are two direct quoted lines from Hamlet, two slightly adapted lines, and one in text reference that will probably be noticed very quickly. If you can pick those out, you get a cookie. Hamlet just seemed to fit. This is what came out of thinking about horror and a "fun" house. I do like it, though, knowing me, I won't in a couple of days.

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This is really deep and good